Hello this is my story board, this story board is about a teenage girl who got a bad message and she didn't know what to do. So she told her older sister and her older sister told her to delete it and forget about it, but in the end she deleted it and she felt better because she deleted the message.
Talofa Lava Henrietta,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Me Journey.
I really liked how you have that amazing comic effect towards your presentation. When I read your post it reminds me of one of those superhero movies but in comic form. Next time you can maybe you could look back and add some animations maybe. But other then that this piece of presentation was amazing.
Kind Regards
Journey
Hello Journey thanks for commenting on my blog! And also thanks for the great feedback, make sure to check out my other posts.
DeleteHenrietta
Kia ora Henrietta it is Noah from room 10, I like the way that you had deleted the horrible message and got it out of your mind. You were really lucky to have your trusty older sister.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Noah first of all thanks for the comment and feed back, but I kind of dont get your comment.
DeleteHenrietta
Hey Henrietta x I love the way you put out different characters into your storyboard. When I read your post I learnt that your siblings are really trustworthy. Next time please try to use more interesting words for others to understand. How did you manage to get this up on your blog? Good Work
ReplyDeleteKind Regards: Teresa
Kia Ora Teresa thanks for the comment and the feedback, and I got the board on my block by taking a screenshot then copied the link and paste it on my new blog post.
DeleteHenrietta
Kia Ora it is Christina I really like your Storyboard but you shouldn´t cramp your words up like that. But i really like your story board. Your work is really outstanding.
ReplyDeleteHello Christina!, big thanks for commenting on my blog and for the great feed back.
DeleteHenrietta
Helloo Henrietta, this shined because it was realistic like it would happen in the real world.When I read your post I learnt that everything on the internet is not always a good thing.To improve you could play around with the setting.
ReplyDeleteHello Nina, thanks for the comment and feedback!.
DeleteHenrietta
Talofa lava henrietta
ReplyDeleteIt's me Peuma liked the way how you did your story and the information and how you fixed the problem. Next time you could write more words.
Malo Peuma , great comment, also thanks and yeah next time I will make sure I put more words in.
DeleteHenrietta
Hey Henrietta, I like the comic effect you have used and i the way you have deleted the bad message and also told someone you trust.
ReplyDeleteFrom Summer
Hello Summer, thanks for the comment, you have a little mistake in your comment but yeah thanks fro the comment and next time it could have been abit longer! THANKS!
DeleteHenrietta